the drug ” ice” is currently having a substantial economic and social impact in Australia.outline the main problem caused,and som measures to reduce the influence of this illicit drug in Austraia.
Introductions
1- Background sentences
? Introduce the topic in an interesting way
? Introduce the scope of the task
? Do not write about the issue, but write in general ( no gambling )
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2- Narrow
? write about topic ( gambling )
3-Definition
? Explain key terms from the question
4- Thesis statement
? Gives the purpose or aim of the essay
? this style (This essay will discuss the problems of gambling , which include problem 1 ( in paragraph 1) , problem 2 (paragraph2 ). It will also describe the solutions, such as solution 1 ( paragraph 1 ) and solution 2 in (paragraph 2 ).
? Do not forget PARALLEL problem 1 and problem 2 , also solution 1 and 2
For example : The marketing of goods and services is designed to bu ild long term and reciprocally valuable exchange relationships between entities and the public. The marketing of products can be accomplished through various methods, one of which is advertising. The core objective of alcohol advertising is to obtain a high market share for the brand. However, in view of the relationship between alcohol advertising andcon sumption patterns, there remains a powerfu l campaign to ban alcohol advertisements.This essay will d iscuss the positive aspects of banning alcohol advertising, which include reducing the rate ofalcohol consumption and changing societal rules regarding alcohol abuse. It will also describe the potential negative aspects, such as economic effects and boosting the rate of consumption oflocal alcoholic beverages
Comment [MU1]:
Comment [MU2]: 1
Comment [MU3]: 2
Comment [MU4]: 4
body
Paragraph 1 :
1- Topic Sentence
2- The major problems of ……… is ( the same problem 1 in introduction , but paraphrase )
3- Supporting sentence 1
4- Supporting sentence 2
5- Supporting sentence 3
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Paragraph 2 :
1- Another problem is ………. ( the same problem 2 in introduction , but paraphrase )
2- Supporting sentence 1
3- Supporting sentence 2
4- Supporting sentence 3
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Paragraph 3 :
1- Topic Sentence
2- The major solution of ……… is ( the same solution 1 in introduction , but paraphrase )
3- Supporting sentence 1
4- Supporting sentence 2
5- Supporting sentence 3
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Paragraph 4 :
1- Another problem is ………. ( the same solution 2 in introduction , but paraphrase )
2- Supporting sentence 1
3- Supporting sentence 2
4- Supporting sentence 3
.please write the number page of the refrance in the body pargragh and also in the rafrance page in the end of the essay
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conclusion
1- USE , In conclusion ,
2- Thesis statement
? Gives the purpose or aim of the essay
? this style (This essay has shown the problems of gambling , which include problem 1 ( in introduction but paraphrase ) , problem 2 ( in introduction but paraphrase ). It will also has shown the solutions, such as solution 1 ( in introduction but paraphrase ) and solution 2 ( in introduction but paraphrase ).
? Do not forget PARALLEL problem 1 and problem 2 , also solution 1 and 2
3- summary
4- Final sentence
? What should do ( individuals and governments and community )
Now I expect a very clear