The professor gave feedbacks for the last paper, “Strategy in Practice Assignment 1.” This professor is very hard on plagiarism. Please be careful about that. Thank you!

” Five Forces Analysis of the Toy Industry:                  45/50

??? The “substitute products” force is deemed “high to high” for the toy industry.

There are many substitutes for toys, including movies, books, videogames, sports, etc.; unfortunately, you fail to mention such substitutes in your discussion.

Five Recommendations for The LEGO Group:          40/50

recommendations lack specificity

For future assignments, please write entirely in continuous prose (i.e. no numbered or bulleted lists).”