Strategic Management CW2

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1st Marker Dr. Vasilios Stouraitis

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Strategic Management CW2

GRADEMARK REPORT

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FINAL GRADE

70/100

GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

Style – 6/10

Clarification and justification of themes/issues to focus

Introduction – 4/5

Identification of scenario actions and issues – 11/15

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on – 4/5

Theoretical analysis – 26/40

Pragmatic realism – 16/20

Conclusion – 2.5/5

Total – 70

A voice comment was left for this paper.

QM 1st Marker Dr. Vasilios Stouraitis

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Comment 1

good intro and good use of references – you could set up the argument more

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Comment 2

good discussion, you seem to use references only at the end and to be less expansive. Try to use more critical depth here.

Comment 3

references? good discussion but could be supplemented by references.

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Comment 4

again good referencing but why only at the end? the discussion is interesting but needs to be backed up

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Comment 5

good use of references in the right location

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Comment 6

good conclusion, could use more recommendations but it is well written.

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