research methods

Please read/ skim to essays 1 & 2 and provide the following. each response 200 words.
What are at least two strengths of their work?
What are the two areas of potential improvement?
Please remember to be respectful while also encouraging continuous improvement in your colleagues.

***This is not a summary of the essay it is a review about how well it was put together, please separate essay 1 and essay 2 individually. Do not compare essays each needs its own response to the questions above.