How to successfully apply for a university abroad

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Essay Assignment # 1
Topics and Research
Reading and Writing Workshops

Thesis Statement and Introduction
Body paragraphs  with sources of information cited appropriately.
Transition phrases/sentences
Conclusion

: Writing a Paraphrase

Integrate sources of information 
APA STYLE 7TH ED.
With a focus on: Signal phrase, paraphrase/quotation and in-text citation

Fragments
Run-Ons