Basically my thesis essay proposal must be based on my annotated bibliography I also know that some of my references in my bibliography are wrong if you can correct them and add them that would be great just a Thesis essay proposal based on ym annotated bibliography but I want a good quality of work please thanks. You can see my topic in my annotated bibliography however still want to mention: Representation of Women in Early Hollywood and How it Changed Over Time. AND PLEASE ADD ANY SOURCES YOU USE N THE REFERENCE PART AS EXTRA. JUST FOLLOW THE CRTERAS MENTONED N THE FLE I SENT YOU SS.